What an overwhelming response I've had to the 1st Update on the Song for MS. The amazing words, thoughts and feelings that have been coming through have given me some incredible inspiration to continue writing the song. During the week however, a suggestion was made for me to consider changing the key lyrics in the chorus from 'Keep on Smiling' to 'Keep on Shining'. I didn't mind the idea, but ran it past my 2 mates Nat and Rory Challis who both liked the suggestion. So, no

Thanks for your feedback on the Song for MS. Here's a 1st verse to go with the original chorus, based on those words and comments sent so far. See below for lyrics..... There's still a heap left to write on this song, so please share this with anyone you think may be interested in contributing and keep sending through that feedback, either on my website or on Facebook. If you're not comfortable sending words through publicly, feel free to send me a Private Message. Hope yo