Here's update #3 on the Song4MS with the 2nd verse now complete. The lyrics are in text below.
At times, I have been quite overwhelmed with the incredibly powerful and personal words that have been sent in. I feel privileged to be receiving them and am treating each contribution with the utmost of respect.
There's still more to write on this song, so feel free to keep your words flowing or let me know if you think the song is missing an important element. I can't guarantee to include 'everything', but I'll do my best to let you know you've been heard. I hope you enjoy this verse. We're getting there now and I will have a revised chorus for you by next weekend (hopefully). Thanks again for your support. Marie